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EL 111: English Communication Skills I
TMA 1   Summer Course /2009
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PART I: TMA INFORMATION
1. | ASSIGNMENT DUE DATE | BY THE END OF WEEK 3 |
2. | UNITS COVERED | UNITS 1-6   ON TARGET 1 |
3. | NUMBER OF PAGES | 5 |
4. | ASSIGNMENT COMPONENTS | WRITING |
5. | TOTAL POSSIBLE POINTS | 30 |

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PART II: STUDENT INFORMATION (to be completed by student)
NAME | Ahmed Hamza Tobaigy | ID | 20707326 |
TUTOR NAME | Mr.larbi | SECTION | |

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PART III: TUTOR REMARKS (to be completed by tutor)
TUTOR NAME | | DATE RECEIVED | |
SIGNATURE | | DATE RETURNED | |

NOTES: |
GRADE: |
Part (A)

ASSIGNMENT (1) ANALYTICAL PARAGRAPH WRITING:

People would like to make changes in their lives. Write a paragraph about the only thing you want to change first. Write a topic sentence in which you explain what that thing is, and develop it by giving reasons why you want it to be changed.

Before you write, plan your paragraph by filling in the following chart. (3 points)

Topic Sentence | Smoking habits . |
Supporting Sentence (1) | How smoking is injuries to my health . |
Supporting Sentence (2) | How smoking is injuries to other . |
Concluding Sentence   | What is the benefit . |

It is advisable to use the following checklist to edit your paragraph when it is done.

  * Topic sentence (the main idea)
  * Supporting sentences (reasons and examples)
  * Concluding sentence (restatement of the topic sentence)
  * Paragraphing (the structure of the paragraph)
  * Variety of sentences.
  * Capitalization and punctuation
  * Grammar and spelling
  * Transitional words
Write your paragraph here.     (12 points)

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    Each and every one of us has some desire in us right this very moment to create...