Good Boss vs Bad Boss
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Week 4 Com 172 Rubric – Draft of Essay |
Content and Development : 6 Points | 5 Points Earned: |
All key elements of the assignment are covered in a substantive way. * The paper is focused on one of the required topics. * The body of the paper is at least 900 words. * The content is comprehensive and accurate. * The paper develops a central theme or idea directed toward an appropriate audience. * The paper remains focused on the key points and uses supporting information to support those points. * The paper links theory to relevant examples and uses the vocabulary of the theory correctly. * Major points are stated clearly and supported by specific details, examples, reasoning, and/or analysis. * At least three sources are cited in the body of the paper, and two of these sources are from the UOP library database. | 1652 Words, 6 References Do not include your outline.Your paper has references to information, but most of your statements are very general. Don't focus on the emotional response to the information. Focus on the information. If your audience is parents, then find some suggestions to how to keep children away from possible predators. What to teach them. The rise of abuse may be partly due to absent parents and latch-key kids. |
Organization : 2 Points | Points Earned: 1 |
* The introduction provides sufficient background on the topic and previews major points. * A clear and limited thesis is present in near the end of the introduction * The conclusion is logical, flows from the body of the paper, and reviews the major points * Paragraph and sentence transitions are present, logical, and maintain the flow throughout the paper. * The tone is appropriate to the content and assignment. | Work on a more professional tone, as if you were a psychological counselor writing to an audience. Try to avoid all the questions and wondering, so that you can make clear, precise statements. Use your sources to...
Content and Development : 6 Points | 5 Points Earned: |
All key elements of the assignment are covered in a substantive way. * The paper is focused on one of the required topics. * The body of the paper is at least 900 words. * The content is comprehensive and accurate. * The paper develops a central theme or idea directed toward an appropriate audience. * The paper remains focused on the key points and uses supporting information to support those points. * The paper links theory to relevant examples and uses the vocabulary of the theory correctly. * Major points are stated clearly and supported by specific details, examples, reasoning, and/or analysis. * At least three sources are cited in the body of the paper, and two of these sources are from the UOP library database. | 1652 Words, 6 References Do not include your outline.Your paper has references to information, but most of your statements are very general. Don't focus on the emotional response to the information. Focus on the information. If your audience is parents, then find some suggestions to how to keep children away from possible predators. What to teach them. The rise of abuse may be partly due to absent parents and latch-key kids. |
Organization : 2 Points | Points Earned: 1 |
* The introduction provides sufficient background on the topic and previews major points. * A clear and limited thesis is present in near the end of the introduction * The conclusion is logical, flows from the body of the paper, and reviews the major points * Paragraph and sentence transitions are present, logical, and maintain the flow throughout the paper. * The tone is appropriate to the content and assignment. | Work on a more professional tone, as if you were a psychological counselor writing to an audience. Try to avoid all the questions and wondering, so that you can make clear, precise statements. Use your sources to...